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History of Dedham, Massachusetts, 1793 - 1999
I have been working on this page for a while, and just put it up. Theres a lot in there, but I'd like any feedback anyone has to offer. Briancua
 * A few comments

All up though a very good article and enjoyable read - Peripitus (Talk) 05:55, 16 February 2007 (UTC)
 * The lead is very short and just introduces the article rather than summarising it.
 * For look I think that the should be moved to the first line and the population table turned horizontal and moved to the end of the article just before the references.
 * Some words need appriate wikilinking early in the article. Words that need linking are Turnpike, tip, Republican, Democratic, Knights of Columbus, High streets, Congressman, Protestant, Unitarian, straw bonnets, stagecoach, Heyday to heyday
 * There seems to be innapropriate capitalisation in places eg:all Massachusetts towns were Constitutionally required (don't hold me to this as my puncuation etc.. is not the best)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 20:41, 19 February 2007 (UTC)