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History of the battery

 * Suggestions: Introduction should be longer; needs more citations (roughly one per paragraph); more technical terms need to be linked, such as electrochemical and Lead-acid battery; citations should follow punctuation (e.g. .[6]); some lengthy paragraphs need to be sub-divided. Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 16:32, 17 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:19, 17 January 2007 (UTC)