Wikipedia:Peer review/Holocaust/archive1

The Holocaust
This article is important and well referenced and I think, rather well written, but it isnt formatted properly. Any suggestions as to how to improve it, and maybe get it featured? Cheers Brent Ward 11:25, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I haven't read all the way down yet, but I can that there is some overlinking, specifically "Jehovah's Witnesses". They're linked in the lead, why link them again in the body of the text? Also, do you have a cite for many Jews preferring "Shoah" over "Holocaust"? I don't remember getting that sense from any of the Jews I went to shul with.--Rmky87 17:47, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
 * To be clear: this means that even that really annoying Hebrew School teacher who chewed out one of my classmates for skipping (Hebrew) school to finish his real homework (she simply had no idea how much more homework you get in a public compared to that fancy dumb-bunny school she was sending her kids to) never berated us for using the word "Holocaust".--Rmky87 17:57, 27 June 2007 (UTC)