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Homer's Enemy
I am currently aiming to get this article to FA status and have modelled it after current FAs Pilot (House), Cape Feare and Homer's Phobia. Any suggestions for improvments, spelling mistakes and grammatical errors are needed. I have left the image "Grime2" for the time being, because it illustrates a key plot point of the episode: Frank Grimes's last momenst. Any suggestions anyone has will be most welcome. -- Scorpion 17:17, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

The Synopsis section could be more detailed. The subplot about Bart has only 4 lines. Buc 07:45, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * It's not a major plot. I think 4 lines is more than enough. -- Scorpion 15:48, 28 March 2007 (UTC)