Wikipedia:Peer review/Human rights in Morocco/archive1

Human rights in Morocco
I believe the article has reached a certain maturity. I think it is the right time for it to be peer reviewed. --  Szvest     Wiki me up ®  13:36, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I fixed refs to agree with WP:FN, external jumps in text (to external websites) need to be converted to Wikilinks or referenced text; I didn't read the article. Sandy (Talk) 17:59, 8 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I feel the lead requires work. It's a little head-first, and uses slightly non-encyclopaedic language with "on the one hand". Of course, it is incredibly hard to strike the right tone in an article like this. A quick skim of the list of human rights articles by country brings up neutrality tags on some of the most vital articles. I don't think any of the articles I've looked at have really excelled in their leads, so that might be the most important area to work on in order to make this article shine. I'm sorry I can't actually help regarding this, but hopefully that elucidates something for you. Seegoon 02:10, 10 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 21:36, 10 December 2006 (UTC)