Wikipedia:Peer review/Human trafficking in Angeles City/archive1

Human trafficking in Angeles City
I've listed this article for peer review because it has been subject to terrible soapboxing issues, edit wars and personality conflicts. The original title was Sexual slavery in Angeles City, and it soapboxed heavily. With the cooperation of several (speaking loosely) impartial editors, it was moved toward encyclopedic quality, but never became "good". The original editor dropped off for a few months during an extended edit conflict with an opposing editor.

For a few months this article has been WP:OWNed by the opposing editor, who deleted much information deemed unflattering to the city of Angeles, including substantial sourced information, often contrary to Talk page consensus, typically for specious reasons that had already been disputed on the Talk page, ending in this version, which also had soapboxing issues. This editor was sufficiently aggravating as to drive away the impartial editors.

Two days ago, the original editor has returned, resulting in this version. Hopefully this is progress. We need some guidance before the edit warring resumes. Big issues will be:
 * presence of soapboxing, especially compared to opposing editor's version
 * possible conflicts of interest, and if they are serious
 * appropriateness of sources

Thanks, edg ☺ ☭ 13:43, 24 November 2007 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 20:17, 25 November 2007 (UTC)