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Hurricane Eugene (1987)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because this is a GA of mine that I want to improve. Thanks for any comments. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  17:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

Some quick comments - TheAustinMan (Talk 17:58, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Eight tropical cyclone" → "Eighth tropical cyclone"
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "As it was rurning northwestward" - what do you mean?
 * Reworded. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The highest rain was..." should probably be better worded as "Rainfall peaked at..."
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)