Wikipedia:Peer review/I Heard It Through the Grapevine/archive1

I Heard It Through the Grapevine
An inherently complex article, becasue it must cover several different versions of one song before it mentions the familiar one by Marvin Gaye (especially since a previous version was almost as big a hit as his). Suggestions on formatting, layout, prose, sectioning, etc. are greatly appreciated. --FuriousFreddy 02:53, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
 * This is a great article. You could add a short description of the lyrics as well as how they are feminized in the Gladys Knight version. -- Mwalcoff 04:50, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Good stuff; it needs references, though. Mark1 13:50, 10 November 2005 (UTC)
 * How long were they # 1 or 2 hits? When? Were there any other significant awards? I don't want to make comparisons for the sake of comparisons, but the article on Layla is really superb.Trevdna 04:47, 14 November 2005 (UTC)
 * The article mentions how long each was a number-one hit on the respective charts in the prose. All significant awards that I have information on (Grammy Hall fo Fame and Rolling Stone List) are alread ymentioned. The "Layla" article is good, but there's a lot of lists where there should be prose. I'm not nominating "Grapevine" for FAC, by the way; I just want to make it a better article. --FuriousFreddy 01:44, 15 November 2005 (UTC)