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I Need You (LeAnn Rimes song)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get some input on how to make this article better. Please post any comments you can to help.

Thanks, Swifty*talk 00:50, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 19:36, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Lead says she's a " country pop artist" but the infobox says it's a "Christian" genre release. Needs resolving.
 * "it was released" is repeated three times in the first para of the lead. Boring.
 * "twenty-five weeks" -> 25 weeks.
 * Background para opening sentence is copy-and-paste of the lead. Boring.
 * In fact, the whole lead opening para is copied verbatim into the Background section. Not the best way ahead.
 * "LeAnn Rimes donated her ..." no need to repeat her first name.
 * "therapeutic rehabilitation wing - the " en-dash per WP:DASH.
 * " this song wasn’t available" avoid contractions.
 * Video section could use a copyedit and a few links.
 * Track listing section also needs WP:DASH treatment.
 * As does "Charts (2000-2001)".
 * Several entries in the Chart positions section are unreferenced.
 * DON'T SHOUT in the ref titles.
 * For non-English refs, use the lang template.
 * Make sure all suitable online links have access dates.
 * Make sure refs meet WP:DASH and have all available info like publisher, access date, publication date, author name etc.