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I Need You (album)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it to a GA status and would like some input on it beforehand.

Thanks, Swifty* talk contribs 11:57, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

Note to nominator: This is your second nomination for 7 December; WP:PR rules allow only one per day from a single nominator - please bear that in mind for the future. Brianboulton (talk) 00:36, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:17, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * Infobox - "1999–02" should really be "1999–2002".
 * "The album was also compared to Faith Hill's album, Breathe (1999)." is this relevant in the lead? And what were the results of the comparison?
 * "certified gold" or "certified Gold"? Be internally consistent.
 * Why don't "You Are" and "Soon" have articles?
 * "between the years 1999 and 2001" no need for "the years".
 * "At the time, during the litigation with her label" not sure you need "At the time" here at all.
 * "Rimes was asking " Rimes asked.
 * "The 2001 release of the album" repetitive from previous sentence. Suggest a merge "... Curb Records, and featured..."
 * "of four minutes and fifty-eight seconds" + "duration".
 * "a ballad[23] song" don't need "song" here.
 * "Mark Huxley at Barnes & Noble.com praised the " followed by "Mark Huxley at Barnes & Noble.com praised the " repetitive.
 * "that Rimes "comfortably adopting some..." not grammatically correct.
 * "saying that "The good" no need for that here.
 * "-- " replace with an en-dash.
 * "two and a half" usually see this hyphenated.
 * "did quite well on" reads too colloquially, perhaps "peformed well".
 * "it fell to" -> "falling to".
 * "Internationally the album did quite well" ditto as above comment.
 * "as high as number five" just "at number five" will do.
 * "Year-end" any need for that Y to be capitalised?
 * "as well as four other countries" the RIAA isn't a country. Perhaps "as well as in four other contries" or "as well as four other organizations".
 * Year-end charts table sorts strangely because the 2002 heading moves...
 * Sales/shipments column doesn't sort correctly.
 * Don't mix date formats in refs (e.g. ref 30, 34 etc).