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I Not Stupid Too
Having spent two months rewriting this article, I would like others to provide specific advice for improving the article, and to assess the article's GA potential. If there is consensus that the article has great GA potential, I would also appreciate advice that would help me get it there. --J.L.W.S. The Special One 11:35, 13 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I would suggest adding a section that explains the satire present in the film in more detail. After all, both I Not Stupid films have underlying messages. Also, consider taking around 2 screenshots of the film and add it to the plot. Finally, the character section could be expended to have a little bit more detail about each character, as in Star Wars Episode III.--Kylohk 10:31, 14 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your suggestions. I was unable to find any screenshots the last time I searched, but I'll try searching again, and hopefully I'll find several screenshots to add to the article. I am concerned that a section on the satire would be original research, although I think I could use the reviews as sources. As for expanding the Cast section, I will keep that in view. --J.L.W.S. The Special One 12:36, 14 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:58, 17 May 2007 (UTC)