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I Still See Your Face


I've listed this article for peer review because I believe that, with some copyediting, it can reach GA. I first created this article in the Portuguese Wikipedia and it is currently a GA nominee there, with no opposition so far. I translated the entire article to English, however, since my English is not too good and I am not 100% familiar with the English Wikipedia standards, there might be some errors that I didn't notice.

Thanks, GhostP.   talk  06:19, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Comment by Ojorojo I updated the infobox (easier than listing here, see Template:Infobox song for current uses). I noticed some problems with the prose and the use of quote boxes – the Guild of Copy Editors may be helpful. Good luck! —Ojorojo (talk) 14:41, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I opened a request there. GhostP.   talk  15:30, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Comment by Miniapolis (who's copyediting the article in response to the GOCE request): I tweaked the quote boxes to avoid sandwiching text. As I noted on your talk page, the infobox image needs a FUR and to be reduced in size. All the best,  Mini  apolis  16:51, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * done, thanks! GhostP.   talk  17:29, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * The copyedit is done and the talk page is tagged. IMO, the quote boxes are too large given the length of the article; the first one is rambling but OK, but the second one can be incorporated into the reception section (which would help keep the first quote box from overrunning its section). All the best,  Mini  apolis  15:38, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. Tysm GhostP.   talk  15:48, 31 October 2020 (UTC)