Wikipedia:Peer review/I Want To Hold Your Hand/archive1

I Want To Hold Your Hand
Just rewrote the article completely. I want to put this on WP:FAC. What do you guys think? Is it featured-level yet? How could it be improved? Johnleemk | Talk 14:27, 1 Sep 2004 (UTC)
 * Another excellent piece. I've taken the liberty of doing a couple of minor edits - just tidying up some phrases here and there, such as swapping "in Abbey Road at Studio 2" to "at Abbey Road in Studio 2", stuff like that. But aside from that, as I said, another great article! You'll soon have more featured Beatles songs than Emsworth has featured nobility! :-) Angmering 15:29, 1 Sep 2004 (UTC)
 * I believe it should be IN Abbey Road, it's In Abbey Road Studios, and the album is also called "... in Abbey Road"Pedant 16:35, 2004 Sep 3 (UTC)
 * Hmmmmmmmm, well I'd respectfully disagree. "In Abbey Road", in my opinion, makes it sound like you're in the middle of the Road itself... Now, of course "at Abbey Road" doesn't sound that much different (in fact "at Abbey Road Studios" would probably be better, although I didn't add the Studios in my original edit because I thought it was well-known enough not to need it...). In my experience of reading articles on albums, television programmes and films, they are nearly always made "at Pinewood Studios", or "at the Record Plant" or "at BBC Television Centre" and so forth, with "in" being used to clarify exactly where. (Although of course if it were a film, you'd probably say "on" Sound Stage so-and-so, but I digress!). Angmering 18:15, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)


 * Forgot to mention &mdash; this is now on WP:FAC. Johnleemk | Talk 07:46, 4 Sep 2004 (UTC)