Wikipedia:Peer review/Ian Donald/archive1

Ian Donald
Hi Folks, I've listed this article for peer review as I think pretty much ready for it. I've not done much work for a wee while. I plan to take to GA once this is finished. Thanks.  scope_creep Talk  13:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, what an interesting article. I would suggest that you expand the lead to better reflect the article, including adding information on his personal life. There are some weasel words which should be removed ("a series of remarkable collaborations", "strove to"). Respectful of the effort you've made to edit this article, I think it could be made much more succinct. Maybe you could request some help from the guild of copy edits. Good luck! --Tom (LT) (talk) 09:51, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi Thanks for doing this. I'll look at the lede in the next couple of days, and move forward from there. I can post a note at the Guild.   scope_creep Talk  09:55, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I completely forgot it. Sorry for keeping you waiting.  scope_creep Talk  08:37, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries, I was just doing my routine cleanup of inactive PRs. Ping me here or on the article page if you'd like more feedback, otherwise you can just nominate directly for GA and see how it goes. --Tom (LT) (talk) 22:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)