Wikipedia:Peer review/Iazyges/archive1

Iazyges
I've listed this article for peer review because, as my namesake article I am interested in getting it to GA (and hopefully FA), hopefully the peer review gets the page to a point where I can bring it to GAN, Thanks! Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  05:19, 1 November 2016 (UTC)

It looks good but I found some issues. Other than I think the article could become a GA. Also, I made my own peer review here. I would appreciate feedback. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 19:03, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Expand the lead a bit. Considering how big is the article, at least the first paragraph could use some expansions.
 * Avoid small sections like name and merge it with History.
 * Same with small paragraphs like "In 50 AD, an Iazyges cavalry detachment fought alongside the Suevian King Vannius, who was a Roman client king of the Quadi.[8]"
 * Try to balance a bit the size of the paragraphs like in After the Dacian Wars
 * I'm mixed in regards to redlinks unless users are developing article about the,-