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Icelandic Phallological Museum
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review so I can find out the main problems with it before nominating for featured article.

Thanks, Pinkie   Pie  09:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Brianboulton comments: A somewhat surprising topic that will bring smiles to many (and maybe tears to a few). I have been to Iceland; how did I miss this? Just a few questions:-


 * The lead is not adequate at present. It should be expanded into a summray of the whole article, briefly mentioning each of the salient areas of the article, including for example the museum's history.
 * The lead image description should be more informative. Is this the museum's official logo? It is described as the museum's "sign", but its location should be indicated.
 * Done by user:Snaevar Pinkie   Pie  17:28, 22 February 2012 (UTC)


 * What makes Salon.com a reliable source?
 * What is the language of the source in citation 8?
 * Icelandic, added to the citation. Pinkie   Pie


 * The sentence: "The museum also has a "folklore section" exhibiting mythological penises; its online catalogue lists specimens taken from elves, trolls, kelpies, and "The Nasty Ghost of Snaefell" is cited to the online catalogue. Is it possible to make the citation a little more detailed, to assist in finding this information?
 * Also done by user:Snaevar. Pinkie   Pie  17:28, 22 February 2012 (UTC)


 * As the precise address of the museum is included in the article, what is the justification for incuding geographic coordinates?
 * Shouldn't all landmarks have geographic coordinates, even if the address is included in the article? Pinkie   Pie
 * Where does that idea come from?? Brianboulton (talk) 01:02, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Well, it seems consistant from article to article. Pinkie   Pie  10:49, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

Great work Brianboulton (talk) 00:07, 16 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Binksternet comments
 * The cites are not consistent with how they say the language. There is (in Icelandic) and (Icelandic). The 2003 Jónsson cite should put the language in a cite parameter which would look like this: |language=Icelandic
 * Done! Wagner lol (talk) 17:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Cite 13, the catalogue, should have its actual title displayed in the cite. When I clicked on it, the title was "Fréttir af Reðasafninu:"
 * The "size is everything" cite... who is the author? The byline says "AFP". Is AFP a person or a news agency?
 * AFP is Agence France-Presse, an agency. This is already in the citation. Wagner lol (talk) 17:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

Binksternet (talk) 17:19, 28 February 2012 (UTC)