Wikipedia:Peer review/Independence Hall (United States)/archive1

Independence Hall
This is an important article and could use peer review. Thanks! --South Philly 04:12, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

A few comments:- --Mcginnly | Natter 13:09, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 15:26, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * I did some of the clean-up. It probably needs to be bulked up with refenced work. --evrik 20:04, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Article is currently suffering badly from a lack of content. The history section is only 3 sentences long. Significance is only 2 and Today is only 1. Needs to be much much more.
 * Use [[Wikipedia:Summary style)) to perhaps give a concise description of the Second continental congress, declaration of independence and the constitution so that the article could be read by someone without a working knowledge of American history. Don't go overboard and always relate back to the building.
 * Perhaps a quick summary sentence as to the significance of the Liberty Bell for us non-U.S. people (Oh it's the one with the cracka and the rivet!, I remember now)?
 * Suggest sections on Architeture (Or Building). Who built the clock?
 * The gallery pics are nice but would be better served to illustrate the text.
 * Today section - Change to Recent History - I'd be inclined to include some of the protest anecdotes from the website you cite. Communist bums! Vietnam etc. etc. the building is a focus and distills american history as a venue for protest.
 * Has the building ever been altered, extended, refurbished, remodelled? When, By whom, in what way, why etc.etc.?