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Independent Broad-based Anti-corruption Commission (IBAC)
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to ensure that readers see it as neutral and factual.

It's important that Victorians are away of the state's anti-corruption agency and I'm seeking any edits to make the content easier to understand.

Thanks, Michael.social (talk) 04:48, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your edits to this article,. It's great to have another editor on board.
 * Comments from Tom (LT)

I suggest some edits to make this article more like other Wikipedia articles in style and tone:
 * Firstly, I suggest including more secondary sources - I notice a lot of primary sources are used in this article (see the essay WP:USINGPRIMARY for more details)
 * I suggest including more WP:WIKILINKs to other related articles so readers can continue to explore this topic
 * I suggest writing in a more discursive fashion, instead of just writing as lists
 * I suggest including a section on public reception and criticism, which is very important to wikipedia articles

I hope this helps. Cheers, --Tom (LT) (talk) 23:19, 30 January 2016 (UTC)