Wikipedia:Peer review/Infantilism/archive1

Infantilism
The edit conflict has died down now and I feel it is time to get a wikipedia peer review of this article. It is a natural step considering its size and how much work has gone into it. --OrbitOne 17:06, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, AndyZ t 18:03, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
 * The WP:LEAD should be expanded to fit WP:LEAD and become a brief overview of the article.
 * Words in section headings should not be linked per WP:MOS. Also, non-proper nouns should not be capatalized, with the exception of the first letter.
 * "Coercion" is way too short- the single sentence is unhelpful here. Either expand it or merge it.