Wikipedia:Peer review/Isaac Starr/archive1

Isaac Starr
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is one of my first full articles.

Thanks, The Haz talk 21:43, 9 November 2011 (UTC)


 * As a biography, this article is still much lacking on the subject's personal life. Who was he, other than a medical specialist?  Even the coverage of his achievements seem a bit skimpy and lacking in "oomph" so as to speak.  What makes http://wc.rootsweb.ancestry.com/cgi-bin/igm.cgi?op=GET&db=maris&id=I207293 a reliable source?  With 3640 hits on Google Books, http://www.google.com/search?q=%22isaac+starr%22+cardio&btnG=Search+Books&tbm=bks&tbo=1, there are more and better sources than what are used (a paper published in Eldercare Technology for Clinical Practitioners stated he was commonly known as the "father of BCG").  Take a look there for material to further flesh out this article.  Jappalang (talk) 12:12, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! The Haz talk 15:56, 23 November 2011 (UTC)