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Isaiah 53
I have sort've run wild with this project, and I am oblivious as to how it sounds to an outside reader, and to what it needs for improvement. It's not very long, but I'd like to know what kind of improvements can be made in order to bring it to Featured or Good Article status. Also, I realize that many will be turned off by the primary source, but remember that WP:NPS states "Some short texts such as short poems and national anthems are usually included in their article, e.g. Ozymandias." AdamBiswanger1 22:11, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I think that the text needs to be at Wikisource. Are the websites you are referencing the most reliable sources for this material?  I would have expected to see more scholarly books.  Jkelly 22:51, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
 * That's certainly one of my thoughts, too. As soon as I take a trip to the library, I'll be able to come back with plenty of better resources.  Although they probably aren't what Wikipedia would call "reliable", I think they're safe, and at worst interesting.  Thanks for your input AdamBiswanger1 18:42, 5 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:28, 9 August 2006 (UTC)