Wikipedia:Peer review/Israel lobby in the United States/archive1

Israel lobby in the United States
A new article on a complex subject. It would be great to get perspectives on the current state of the article from anyone but of particular value would be views from people new to the subject or who are removed from the many Israel-Palestine edit wars that go on here on Wikipedia. --Ben Houston 17:18, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

The article "Israel lobby in the United States" reads more like a muted political polemic than a detached, analytical definition of the term. It appears that the author took a list of objections to use of the term, and then disputed each of them by drawing on a body of information that appears exclusively drawn from the political hard left. The article contains far too many politicized buzzwords - they are used but not defined, refined or contextualized. The effort is unscholarly and amateurish.
 * The above is an unsigned comment by User:Cbakes on 15:56, September 5, 2006. Apparently, a single use account of someone else on Wikipedia?  But good suggestions for improvement none the less.  --Ben Houston 03:40, 20 September 2006 (UTC)