Wikipedia:Peer review/Jake and Amir/archive1

Jake and Amir
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know how it can be improved before I nominate it for WP:FA status.

Thanks, – Anne drew  15:58, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Comments by David Fuchs
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 20:34, 9 August 2019 (UTC)


 * I don't know if you've already started this review, but I've just split the article so it is probably a good idea to hold off on a review until I've done a bit more cleanup. If it's okay with you I'd like to withdraw this request. – Anne drew  19:54, 12 August 2019 (UTC)
 * No problem, I didn't get that far in my notes. If you want you can give me a yodel later on if you still need comments in the future. Cheers! Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs  talk 20:02, 12 August 2019 (UTC)