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James Burbage
This peer review discussion has been closed. This article has recently undergone extensive editing. The additions are substantial, and the topic important enough to warrant a review.

Thanks, Redcknight (talk) 14:00, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 17:54, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Not sure if you're heading to GA or similar shortly but these comments are based on that assumption.
 * Check WP:DASH, I see a lot of hyphens being used incorrectly.
 * Three links to dab pages, The Rose, The Swan and The Globe, need to be fixed.
 * The Globe Theater -> please, it's a theatre.!!
 * Lead is very short.
 * Who said the quote about his "life"?
 * Don't overlink (e.g. "joiner" is over linked quickly).
 * "in manor" -> "in manner".
 * "depicted James as more motivated" -> depicted Burbage.
 * "March 25, 1576. [9] " remove space before ref.
 * As a British English article, dates should be dmy.
 * The Gurr reference needs an en-dash per my second comment.
 * Don't think you can use 1531 births as a ref as you don't know it's true. Is there a 1530s birth category?