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Jeddah
This article was posted at FAC but is a more suitable candidate for peer review at this time. --Aude (talk) 16:28, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The Table of Contents is too long. The sections of the article need better organization.
 * Etymology section is good.
 * Geography would be a better name for the "Locations" section.
 * Weather section should be instead called "Climate" and be a subsection under "Geography".
 * Diversity section should probably be called "Demographics"
 * There should be a section for "Culture". Open air art can be part of the culture section.
 * There should be a section for "Economy".  Organizations headquartered in Jeddah can be mentioned in that section.
 * The list of hotels and shopping is not suitable for including in the article.
 * Please look at other featured articles about cities, such as Ahmedabad and Jerusalem, to see how those articles are organized. These articles also have numerous references, letting the reader know where specific statistics and numbers, and other facts came from.  References are essential for Wikipedia articles to become good articles and especially feature articles.
 * Please get the sections in order. That would be a good improvement.  Once that's done, I can give more comments. Thanks. - شكرا --Aude (talk) 16:57, 20 May 2007 (UTC)