Wikipedia:Peer review/Jeffree Star/archive1

Jeffree Star
I would like to see what other users think of the effort of several users have made in improving this article over the past few months. It would be nice to see this as a good article someday, and progressed into a featured article. This has been on AFD and deletion review several times due to Jeffree Star not being notable yet, but it seems now that he has a fanbase and notability outside of MySpace and Buzznet.-- milk the cows (Talk) 17:34, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

Automated Peer Review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 11:43, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * If this article is about a person, please add  along with the required parameters to the article - see Persondata for more information.[?]
 * Per Wikipedia:Context and Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.[?]
 * As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.[?]
 * The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]