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Jessica Mauboy discography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it to FL status again, as this is a former featured list article. Thanks, Oz   talk  22:09, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 18:33, 23 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I think it's clear the infobox image is a "publicity shot", so no need for that.
 * Possibly will be met at FLC with a 3b objection, i.e. it could still be incorporated into Mauboy's main article since its not that big.
 * "and subsequently earned a record deal" maybe just "signed a record deal"?
 * " (which contained selected songs Mauboy performed on Australian Idol), " no need for the parentheses in my opinion.
 * "denoting shipments of 35,000 copies" "of at least/in excess of... 35,000"?
 * "double platinum, denoting shipments of 140,000 copies" so ARIA says double plat is exactly 140k?
 * Platinum cert = 70k, so double that makes 140k.
 * No real coverage of "other appearances" or "videos" in the lead.
 * "double platinum, denoting shipments of 140,000 copies" so ARIA says double plat is exactly 140k?
 * Platinum cert = 70k, so double that makes 140k.
 * No real coverage of "other appearances" or "videos" in the lead.
 * No real coverage of "other appearances" or "videos" in the lead.