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Jessica Simpson discography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that this article has been improved nicely. I need extra suggestions to make this article good for a FL nomination.

Thanks, No vice 7   (Talk)  14:16, 4 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Simpson's debut album Sweet Kisses was released... There should be a comma after "album" and before "was".
 * released by Columbia Records on... "Through" not "by"
 * on November, 1999., poor English, "in November 1999" no comma and no "on"
 * There should be a hyphen between twenty and five
 * The album sold about 1.9 million copies[3] in the US produced three singles. The reference [3] needs to be after the period.
 * ...RIAA.[4][5]The third single from the album... Space at beginning of sentence.
 * Add link to single (single (music)) the first time the word is mentioned.
 * "I Think I'm in Love with You" reached number twenty one in the US comma after the song name.
 * released in June, 2001 delete comma.
 * dated June 5, 2001 deleted this
 * first week dated June 5, 2001[6][7] and was certified Gold by RIAA.[2] [6][7] should be at the end of the sentence
 * Irresistible sold 755,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned two singles. [3] Should be at end of sentence.
 * The title track reached number fifteen in the US and also reached top twenty in many international markets. Two things: insert "album's" before "title track" and place reference [4] at the end of the sentence.
 * In July, 2002 Simpson released her first remix album titled This Is the Remix. Remove the comma between July and 2002 and place a comma after 2002.
 * Simpson's third studio album was released in August, 2003. Add comma after album abd remove comma between August and 2003.
 * {{xt|The album reached number two in the US[1] and was certified three times platinum by RIAA.[2] Move reference [1] to end of sentence.
 * {{xt|Simpson's seventh single "With You" reached}} Add comma before and after "With You".
 * {{xt|fourteen in the US[4], and}} comma goes before reference [4]
 * {{xt|album's re-release[9], a cover}} comma goes before reference [9].
 * {{xt|In November, 2004 Simpson released her }} remove comma between November and 2004.
 * Add link to Christmas album.
 * {{xt|After switching record label to Epic Records[10], in August 2006 Simpson released her fifth studio album A Public Affair.}} reword.
 * {{xt|The album has sold just over 300,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned three singles}} Reference [3] at end of sentence.
 * {{xt|a cover of Nancy Sinatra's "These Boots Are Made For Walkin' originally}} Comma after song name AND the Apostrophe should be a quotation mark.
 * {{xt|film The Dukes of Hazzard in which Simpson co-starred[11], reached number fourteen}} reference [11] should go after the comma.
 * {{xt|The title track, released}} add "album" before "title track".
 * {{xt|album, also reached number fourteen[4] in the US and topped the US Billboard Hot Dance Club Play.[4].}} Delete reference [4] after fourteen and remove spare period after reference [4].
 * {{xt| a country imprint of Columbia Records[13], and released Do You Know}} Two things: reference [13] should go after comma and comma should go after "Do You Know"
 * {{xt|lead single "Come On Over", reached}} Remove comma
 * {{xt|five in the US Billboard Hot 100[4] and number eighteen in the US Billboard Hot Country Songs[4].}} remove reference [4] after "US Billboard Hot 100" and the period should go before reference [4].
 * {{xt|October, 2010 Sony Music released a compilation}} remove comma after October.
 * {{xt|album v Playlist: The Very Best of Jessica Simpson}} "titled" should be "entitled".
 * {{xt|christmas album titled Happy Christmas is}} entitled, not titled.
 * {{xt|scheduled for a November 2010 release[16]}} period before reference [16]
 * {{done}} No vice 7   (Talk)  11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Albums
 * The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
 * Their are only 13 columns in Do You Know, when there should be 14.
 * {{xt|Do You Know peaked at #1 on the U.S. Billboard Top Country Albums chart.}} reference needed.
 * Softpak albums should not have a "Notes" section.
 * {{done}} No vice 7   {{sup|(Talk)}}  11:25, 7 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Singles
 * The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
 * "Singles" and "Promotional singles" should be merged together.
 * {{xt|"A Little Bit" was only released outside the United States.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Come On Over" also peaked at #18 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|"Remember That" also peaked at #41 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Released only to promote the album. TV Shows performances.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Released only in Brazil, through the soundtrack of "As Filhas Da Mae."}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Promotional single only in the US.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Released only in Christmas days, in U.S., Canada, UK ,Australia and Asia.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Released only to US and Canada Country Radio stations.}} reference needed.
 * {{xt|Opening Theme to "The Price of Beauty". Promotion of the series only.}} reference needed.
 * {{done|Removed the links to promotional singles as there are no sources}} No vice 7   {{sup|(Talk)}}  11:25, 7 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Miscellaneous appearances
 * Rename to "Other appearances"
 * {{done}} No vice 7   {{sup|(Talk)}}  11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Videography
 * {{xt|List of music videos, showing year released and director(s)}} remove this
 * Add ""—" denotes items which were not released in that country or failed to chart." to the bottom of the DVDs graph.
 * {{done}} No vice 7   {{sup|(Talk)}}  11:46, 6 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Other
 * I don't see any problems with the references, but Amazon might be challenged as a reliable source.
 * I didn't check the verifiability of the references, so I hope it's accurate...
 * File:Jsimpsondsc00203.jpg needs more information on it. I strongly suggest using Template:Information.
 * {{OK}}

{{Fixed|Eveything's fixed. Discography updated per DISCOGSTYLE}}

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