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Jesus for President
I've listed this article for peer review because Wugapodes, the good article reviewer for this article, recommended one to help tighten prose. I intend to submit this article for featured status, so any comments that would help prepare this article to be featured would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks, Neelix (talk) 12:00, 6 September 2015 (UTC)