Wikipedia:Peer review/Joe Tompkins/archive1

Joe Tompkins
I have been working on this article for some time and I would like some feedback on how to improve it. I think it may be good enough to be a B-class article and I would like to get it to at least GA in the futurePeanutter67 15:47, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Each section in this article needs to be expanded upon and additional citations are needed within the article to show where the information came from. Otherwise, it looks like you are off to a good start! RyguyMN 06:10, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for comments, I will try and improve the article in the coming weeks. Peanutter67 15:45, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
 * No problem! One other thing is that trivia sections are kind of frowned upon on Wikipedia (see WP:TRIVIA), so you'll want to see if you integrate this info within the article. RyguyMN 23:11, 6 July 2007 (UTC)