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Joe Warbrick
Joe Warbrick was a 19th century rugby footballer who organised and captained the 1888-89 New Zealand Native Football team. I'm hoping to take this article to WP:FAC sometime next year. It's been a Good Article for a couple of years now, and I think it's close to being ready for FAC, but want any feedback I can get before nominating.

Thanks, Shudde  talk 14:33, 24 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Following the tour he also criticised the impartiality of the English referees - umm, isn't impartiality a good thing? Don't you mean bias/partiality..? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:46, 30 December 2016 (UTC)


 * The Natives played a total of 107 rugby matches, including 74 in the British Isles, and the tour remains the longest tour in rugby history - see if you can reword so only one "tour" in sentence...


 * I'd add some more details about his death, if they can be sourced.

Otherwise looks in order...a nice little read. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:50, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments! I'll try and address those points. I appreciate the time you took to read and comment. Thanks. -- Shudde  talk 15:55, 30 December 2016 (UTC)