Wikipedia:Peer review/John Carver Meadows Frost/archive1

John Carver Meadows Frost
I've been asked by User:Bzuk about getting this article peer reviewed so can someone take a look. Thanks. Ian Dunster 09:20, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
 * As a biography, it couldn't hurt to add more personal information. - Triviaa 16:11, 30 September 2006 (UTC)
 * There are absolutely no inline citations at all. The external links at the bottom of the article are set out weirdly(see an FA for examples). The lead section needs to be two or three paragraphs. However, there is a hell of a lot of info here, just needs fiddling with. Dev920 (Tory?) 19:10, 5 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 01:32, 16 October 2006 (UTC)