Wikipedia:Peer review/John F. Kennedy assassination/archive1

John F. Kennedy assassination
This article is a lengthy mess. It appears that in the past no consensus was formed but instead each side of the debate merely dumped its material into the article. It could use some dedicated editors to assist in forging consensus, eliminating some of the material, and disproving some of the wilder assertions presented as fact. Gamaliel 01:16, 11 Nov 2004 (UTC)


 * I'll have a go at refactoring it into a main article with a number of subpages. Expect to see something drop in soon. jguk 08:36, 15 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Since the prior peer review there have been an almost complete overhaul of the article. If anyone has some ideas for improving the article in its current condition, please assist. Ramsquire 19:02, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Well, first of all you need to get rid of the neutral tag. Secondly, the "president's motorcade" section contains too many red links. If those people are notable enough for an article, at least make a stub. If not, don't wikilink them. Borisblue 05:07, 15 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 01:40, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
 * This needs many inline citations - proper ones, not few external links. Also, terms in bold should be ilinked instead. 'President's motorcade' section looks strange: too many tiny paras with red links.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 02:58, 21 October 2006 (UTC)