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John Seigenthaler Sr.
This article caused major controversy in its initial version. Since then, the article has been substantially improved. The article is currently in a stable state and seems to be of fairly high quality. I would like to know if anyone has suggestions for improving the article further. Can the article be better organized? Is the writing style consistent? Are there any holes in the content that need to be filled? Does it need more pictures? Any advice would be appreciated. Thanks. Kaldari 23:01, 1 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Isn't this up for vote in the AID drive? -- ZeWrestler  Talk 05:05, 3 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it's been up there for a while. I've been gradually improving the article myself while it's been up at AID. Kaldari 07:56, 3 January 2006 (UTC)