Wikipedia:Peer review/Jon Huntsman, Jr./archive1

Jon Huntsman, Jr.
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because…I believe this is an excellent article worthy of Featured article status, and before I nominate it I would like the opinion of fellow editors on how it could be improved.

Thanks, Grammarxxx (talk) 03:27, 26 September 2012 (UTC)