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Jordin Sparks discography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FL. Any feedback and suggestions would be great! Thanks, Oz   talk  22:09, 17 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments Otherwise, look forward to seeing it at FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
 * No mention of soundtrack appearances in the lead. ✅
 * " and earned her a record deal " no need for "her" or replace "and" with "which". ✅
 * "was then released in" no need for "then". ✅
 * Link "certified" to Music recording sales certification. ✅
 * "As of November 2010," nearly March 2012, any update?
 * I'll try searching for more recent sales. Oz   talk  03:26, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Update: I could not find any recent updates on the album's sales. Oz   talk  05:12, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
 * "as of December 2010" ditto.

Comments from Michael Jester
 * Overall, an excellent article. Great work so far. I hope to see it in FLC soon. Anyway,
 * Some references (the Hung Medien-related ones) have lower case letters in the work parameter (e.g. australian-charts.com). While I don't particularly care too, too much about this, some users can be picky. ✅
 * Ref #14: According to Template:Cite news, a person should not be put as a publisher. ✅
 * Ref #38: Use -' to turn "' into ✅