Wikipedia:Peer review/José Rizal/archive1

José Rizal
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 * Started and fixed nomination. AZ t 14:58, 10 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 14:58, 10 November 2006 (UTC)


 * There are some issues, I'm a little confused by what did with the footnotes, please follow WP:FN guideline. Regarding the prose, watch out for dragging on sentences. There quite a few long sentences with multiple use of commas. Back to footnotes, for such a long article it's undercited with some section containing no footnotes what-so-ever. Especially the quotes need footnotes. Anyway, it was an intresting read. Good luck with the article. - Tutmosis  22:27, 10 November 2006 (UTC)