Wikipedia:Peer review/Jovan Vladimir/archive2

Jovan Vladimir
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like a feedback on its prose, and fresh eyes to see if anything needed additional clarifications. I think that after a proper copy-editing this article could be nominated for FA status.
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Thanks, Vladimir  (talk) 16:17, 19 September 2011 (UTC)