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Julia Butterfly Hill
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it's undergone significant editing and I was interested in a second opinion of what the article needs before it can be eligible for Good Article Status.

Thanks, The lorax (talk) 00:14, 19 September 2009 (UTC)


 * 1) You have too many quotes in your article, try to incorporate them into the text.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
 * 2) The Lead is too short, you need at least one more paragraph. see LEAD--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
 * 3) Julia_Butterfly_Hill In music should be prose and not a list. You have to reference those facts. see Cite--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) Don't bold "Butterfly Hill, Julia" in the references.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
 * 5) Add ALT text to the second image.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 22:58, 27 September 2009 (UTC)