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Justin Tuck
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've been putting in some serious elbow grease in improving this article. I'd like to improve it and hopefully make it a GA.

Thanks, Endless Dan 13:16, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

Hey Dan, some comments which may help on your quest for GA.
 * Comments from
 * Expand the lead. You currently have one very short para about him and then another single-sentence paragraph which isn't about him at all.  Check out WP:LEAD to see what should go in there.Done
 * The image caption is a fragment so it doesn't need a full stop.Done
 * "(2005-present)" in the infobox should use the en-dash to separate the dates, so it'll end up being 2005–present.Done
 * "His cousin Adalius Thomas plays for the New England Patriots.[2][3][4]" shouldn't be in the lead and why does it need three refs?
 * All those refs are also used for different statements found in the article so I figured it would do no harm to source it more then once. Smoke em if ya got em.


 * Lots of American football jargon in the "Central Coosa County High" section. Need to explain or wikilink. Done
 * Numbers below 10 should be written out in words. Done
 * Move references to the right place per WP:CITE, e.g. [6] is just before a comma when it should be just after the comma. Done
 * Giants season sections are really short. Either expand or merge. Done
 * Tried to satisfy this the best I can. He is a back-up player and was injured for a third of his career. I merged 05 & 06 and expanding the 07 section the best I can. I hope this is okay.


 * Don't put spaces between punctuation and citations! Done - I believe I got em all.
 * Personal Life section should be Personal life (lower case L) Done and should be prose, not bullet point trivia list. Done
 * I added most of the personal life section to the opener and to the Super Bowl sections.

Hope that helps. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:45, 7 April 2008 (UTC)