Wikipedia:Peer review/KITE Kerala/archive1

KITE Kerala


I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what this article lack and weather there copy edit is neede

Thanks,

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * The lede could be expanded to cover more aspects of the article
 * The article suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION, with many sections only one paragraph long. Try to merge these together or expand upon them.
 * Merge citations that are the same, like citations 30-35. Help:Footnotes has information about this, or look at some other articles and copy their code.
 * Suggest archiving your websites using the IABot. The link to do that is here.
 * Many of the accolades might not be notable because they do not have their own wiki-articles. Wikipedia is not for promotion and not a database so if the award is not notable, it should not be in the article.
 * A copy-edit is definitely needed, especially with punctuation. The Guild of Copyeditors might help with this.
 * Are you connected to this organisation? If so, please read WP:COIE (and if you are paid by the organisation, please also read WP:PAID) and if you have any questions, please ping me.

That's all I have for now. Z1720 (talk) 22:06, 8 January 2023 (UTC)