Wikipedia:Peer review/Karrinyup Shopping Centre/archive1

Karrinyup Shopping Centre
Opening Peer Review to get additional feedback on the article in order to progress it to possible FA status. Thewinchester (talk) 07:44, 26 July 2007 (UTC) Issues:
 * 1) History of centre from 1973 onwards needs to be completed, including addition of coverage of 1982 and 1987 extensions. Thewinchester (talk) 07:44, 26 July 2007 (UTC)

Twenty Years
Although i have bugger all knowledge of shopping centres, ill give this a go, just for Le' Win. Thats about all i can see, otherwise its probably close to GA. Another quality piece of work from The Winchester, a true WA champ. Keep it up.Twenty Years 09:26, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
 * in "1996 Redevelopment" there are 4 citations next to each other, i think it looks a tad ugly, and that they should be merged, per the referencing style used in Hamersley, Western Australia.
 * In facilities, just before the [cite needed] tag, there needs to be a fullstop.
 * Ownership section seems a tad confusing to me. I cant see how they came to their current arrangement (in relation to percentages of ownership) given the information contained in infobox and ownership section. Maybe its just me, not sure.