Wikipedia:Peer review/Keeper of the Lost Cities/archive1

Hello, If possible, I would like a peer review for the page Keeper of the Lost Cities. It is relatively new in its current form, and because it is written by newer editors, it could use some help. I'm mainly looking for things from someone who has not read the series, feedback on where there are things that don't make sense to someone who hasn't read it, in-universe terms, etc. I would also like help where it may not be neutral, or not informational enough. Thank you, PyrokineticFintan (talk) 00:53, 8 January 2022 (UTC)