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Kelli Presley


I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to bring it up to Featured article status. I've managed to get it to Good article status but I would like outside opinions on how to further improve it.

Sincerely, PanagiotisZois (talk) 22:36, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Comments by Cas Liber
I am making some changes as I go, the reasons are in the edit summaries. Ask if any questions or revert if I change the meaning accidentally:


 * After kicking him out of, - something is missing here....

I have been browsing on google for any possible out-of-universe information to add, interviews where (maybe) alternative actors were considered for the role or other information about the script etc....but I can't find anything. This worries me as the article is otherwise pretty flimsy, just plot and some reviews, some of which can the role anyway. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:12, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
 * First of all, thank you for taking the time to help me. Secondly, I know what you mean, finding any sort of information on the movie in general has been pretty hard. Apparently, Amanda Seyfried auditioned for the role but I couldn't find a reliable source for that. As for the script, in a previous edit I had a link to it (which also gave a description of Kelli) and used it to show that the character didn't change much during development. Unfortunately that constitutes as original research so I had to remove it. PanagiotisZois (talk) 14:37, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
 * BuddyTV does state that she auditioned for the role. Here Is that site a reliable source? PanagiotisZois (talk) 14:40, 3 February 2017 (UTC)