Wikipedia:Peer review/Kenya national cricket team/archive1

Kenya national cricket team
The article looks good and is fairly sourced, what do the reviewers think needs to be done to give it a FA push.--THUG CHILD z  00:21, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Just a few suggestions:


 * 1) The intro should be expanded to summarize the entire article. Usually two or three paragraphs. See WP:LEAD
 * 2) Are there any free-use pictures that can be added? -- Underneath-it-All 02:10, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I'll look for some pictures and will get to work at the lead too, thanks.--THUG CHILD z  02:16, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

User:SpecialWindler
My review, just some quick pointers to improve the article.
 * The lead should be expanded due to the size of the article
 * See WP:LEAD
 * In the History section, here are some suggestions
 * Merging stubby sections like "Early Days", "ICC Membership", "1996 World Cup".
 * Can the tournament History section, with all the statistics be moved into tables, it would look better. Like
 * Can the "The Future" section be a sub section of "History", which although it isn't history, it is going to be and that section should be expanded.
 * Maybe a table for the current players
 * Use to link List of Kenyan ODI cricketers and List of Kenyan first-class cricketers
 * Here, add to the top of the "Players" section, and remove the section "List of Players"
 * May use tables for the "Records" section, which may need expanding. It may be better to type the Records section.
 * Avoid red links, there are a few throughout the article, just leave them without links.
 * Categories need to be in alphebetical order (numbers 1-9, then, letters A-Z)

Thats a quick review. SpecialWindler 09:36, 1 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I have started putting the tournament section into tables like you requested. Black hole77  talk 15:09, 12 August 2007 (UTC)