Wikipedia:Peer review/Keri Hilson discography/archive1

Keri Hilson discography
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FL. But firstly, I would like some feedback on the article for any improvements.

Thanks, Oz   talk  00:38, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Otherwise this will make a very suitable candidate at WP:FLC. Well done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:03, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * "singer-songwriter Keri Hilson, consists of " no need for the comma. Done
 * "with T.I.." try to avoid the double full stop. Done
 * "number 11 on the US Billboard 200 chart, and number seven " 11->eleven (allowed by MOS and preferable not to mix the formats in a single sentence). Done
 * Where is "Make Love" referenced? – Which section are you talking about? Oz   talk  13:23, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * In the "As lead artist" section. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Theres a link to the song article. Oz   talk  13:49, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Its existence should be referenced here, not by virtue of the fact there's an article (quality of which is unknown). The Rambling Man (talk) 13:53, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Done
 * Same question for "She Don't Wanna Man" – Do you mean the Featured singles table? Oz   talk  13:23, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Yep. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:36, 14 December 2011 (UTC) Done
 * Joseph Khan -> Kahn. Done
 * Laurie Ann Gibson -> Laurieann Done

—Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 16:29, 15 December 2011 (UTC) Done —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 01:52, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Quick comments from Michael Jester
 * How come the Soundtrack appearances, guest appearances, and music video tables do not have ! scope="row"? I think that's a part of WP:ACCESS. Fixed
 * For the bottom of the tables (Idk if there's a specific word for it or not), I'm pretty sure there should there not be a comma before "or". Done
 * How come you have multiple references in the table columns for some (Example US R&B peaks for lead artist singles) and some have only one?
 * Because not all chart peaks are mentioned in one reference for those columns with multiple references. Oz   talk  03:26, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * So why can't you do something like ref #2, #15, #27? Done
 * I see under-linking in the reference section.
 * I'm sorry but I'm not familiar with the term "under-linking" lol. Which part? Oz   talk  03:26, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * It may be called something else, I'm not sure. Anyway, in the references section, things should be wikilinked on every occasion (except when multiple citations are used in a single reference [e.g. #2, #15]).
 * We can't add repeated links per WP:OVERLINK. Oz   talk  11:01, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
 * That's for the article itself, not the references. It makes sense because a reader wants to learn more about something, they have to look through many references just to find it. J Milburn explains it better when I nominated K-Ci & JoJo for FL.
 * Why is iMDB in the EL section? I thought that was for movies? Removed
 * Other than that, I think the article looks great.


 * Brief comments from Nikkimaria
 * One dead link
 * In general, too many commas - for example, "Hilson co-wrote songs for artists such as, Mary J. Blige" doesn't need one
 * Be consistent in what is wikilinked when in footnotes. I see that the reviewer above recommended wikilinking on every occasion - you can if you wish, but if so, it must be every time (except for the exception mentioned above). Nikkimaria (talk) 19:36, 20 December 2011 (UTC)