Wikipedia:Peer review/Kiddy Grade/archive1

Kiddy Grade
I have just spent time readjusting the content but not the written text of the page above, and wish to be advised on how to proceed. This (thankful) request also includes the character page listed through this helpful little box. The text on all the pages was mainly copied from other sites by previous people, which is a BIG reason to change it. I will be thankful for any suggestions! --Crampy20 21:53, 24 July 2006 (UTC) Category:Kiddy Grade
 * Indeed, good work so far. I think discussing the characters should wait until after the AFD is over. Stifle (talk) 13:14, 25 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:47, 26 July 2006 (UTC)


 * See Excel Saga for a FA class anime article. Characters should be briefly summarized in the article, as should the world. Episode list is ugly - could use a screencap from each episode and a summary. Current summary is completly unwikified (no hyperlinks). Theme songs is barely a stub section (list of two...), should be merged with soundtracks and expanded. No inline citations, sources should be renamed references, see Citing sources. Is there no manga? It should also be described. Critical reception (reviews, rankings, etc.) section is completly missing.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus talk 16:39, 26 July 2006 (UTC)
 * There are manga (see infobox on main article), but they were based on the anime rather than the other way around (the manga and novels, apart from the novelisations of the series itself, are all in the form of prequels/spinoffs/subplots to the main story). Most of the material has never been translated (although there are fan translations of one of the manga and a chapter of the other).