Wikipedia:Peer review/Kingda Ka/archive1

Kingda Ka
As a part of an improvement drive over at WikiProject Roller Coasters, I'd quite like to get this article up to scratch. I'm already aware that there's a severe lack of references and I'm already working on getting them in. What I think the article really needs is a review from the POV of a non-enthusiast, with the intention of getting this up to GA. Many thanks! Sea serpent 85Talk 18:16, 22 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Good article. Here are a few minor suggestions:

VisitorTalk 08:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Put the aviation concern into its own paragraph. Did this affect the design process or cause a delay in opening the ride?
 * The line "passes by the lockers." What lockers?  Is this significant?
 * The braking fins should be discussed in the ride overview, before the section on the malfunction.
 * Is a picture available showing riders in the car, restraints in place?
 * Is a picture available showing a car in action on the track?


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 02:06, 15 September 2007 (UTC)