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Klallamornis


I've listed this article for peer review because I'm looking forward to nominate it eventually for Good Article status. Any feedback is welcome, as I don't really know which sections would need improvement. My english is not necessarily the best too, and some sections might still be a bit jargonny. Thanks, Larrayal (talk) 03:31, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720
Comments after a quick skim:


 * Domning, Ray & McKenna 1986" What citation is this? More information is needed.
 * "Mayr, G.; Goedert, J. L. (2016)" Title of the article should not be in all caps per MOS:ALLCAPS
 * The lede usually does not have citations, as the information should also be in the body of the article, per WP:CITELEDE.
 * Suggest looking for additional sources in WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org, doaj.org and your local library system.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 15:29, 22 June 2023 (UTC)


 * All modifications have been done. There is no additional sources. Thank you for the feedback ! Larrayal (talk) 01:39, 23 June 2023 (UTC)