Wikipedia:Peer review/Kota Kinabalu/archive1

Kota Kinabalu
Hi there. I have contributed a lot to this article and would like some feedback on its current form: prose, grammar, content, anything that needs improvement. Any feedback will be appreciated very much. kawaputra 04:50, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Why no review? a simple comment, or even automated review is ok. Just want a little feedback. Thanks. kawaputra  04:07, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Comments by User:RaveenS
Just a few

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 * The lead in is extensive, look into shortening it.
 * Number of citations have been not properly cited yet, example [1], [2] instead of using proper citation format. RaveenS 15:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks Raveen. will try apply your suggestions asap. kawaputra tok2me 07:14, 9 April 2007 (UTC)